Bitten: Book One of the Bitten Vampire Series

I enjoyed this freebie. It kept me entertained and curious as to what was going to happen next. So what if Ally seems a bit shallow, we all have been shallow at times. Especially when young and on the prowl.(I spent alot of time getting ready back then...sigh.... I like how determined she is to meet this man she can't stop thinking about or looking at. Things do move a little fast after that, but who am I to question the author's vision of HER particular breed of vampire? The story ends on a cliffhanger, but the next book picks right up where this one left off.(it's $.99 called Stolen)

The 2nd book(novella/short story) has a completely different vibe and is alot different than this one. I think it's totally worth checking out. Especially if you like naughty and misbehaving vamps and mortals getting themselves into trouble.

I really hope the author will go past a trilogy, I see alot of potential in these characters and the story lines she has started. But if you haven't made it to the second book, you wouldn't know that.

On another note...I got this from the free list and I am giving my honest opinion. I think some people go out of their way to be nasty in their reviews, because they can, when they could definately word them in a gentler tone. No one MADE you read the book, it was FREE.(Sorry, sometimes things just need to be said, or in this case written.)

Happy reading.
DawnBee <3

I was not impressed with writings. The character was every girls nightmare. No one follows people down a dark alley. And no one in there right mind say oh yeah I will go with u. I hope the author does better in future books sorry

I rated this 4 stars because it was very entertaining and well written. This book has suspense and wonder in it. I would recommended it to people who love reading about vampires because that's what the whole book is about.

This is not your regular Vampire romance novel. It tells the story of a girl who finds her true love and finds out who he is? A Vampire! If your under the age of 11 or 12 don't read this because it's not suited for little kids. But overall this book was fantastic.

As I started reading, it caught my attention quick that everything was going way too fast. I figured the author intended this to focus on what happens after they have mated, and then found out not too short after, that the book ended... already. Very disappointed I didn't read the reviews first because now I want more and just hoping the second book is a bit longer and has more too it.

There are some definite grammar issues and it is a bit hurried but I still enjoyed it. For a free book I actually think it was better than some that I have read that are also in the free book category.