Biker's Baby Girl

THIS BOOK WAS AWESOME!!!!
This book was Alpha Male to the tenth power. I love the book because she had other Alpha from her books from different books. You will love this book if you love Jordan Silver book.

Loved it! I especially like the combination of other characters from previous books. Jordan's characters are Alpha's who love their women and will protect anyone in trouble. Having all these Alpha men combined in solving an issue was a great idea! I can't wait for the next one!

The storyline is great. I love the characters, and the chemistry between them. My absolute favorite part is the cameos of other alphas from other books. That alone made this a five stars book. Add the hotness, and the character dynamic and it covered all that I love to read.

Gritty and real. I read the negative reviews after I finished and although they might have merit to that particular reader, I personally was deeply involved in the book while I read it. Was the F bomb drop every few words, yes! As do a lot of working men I know. Did the big bad biker get brought to his knees when thinking of his feelings for the woman he loves, yes! If only I had that problem! Was there steamy sex through out the book, yes! Duh.. Was worrying about sentence structure while reading this book, Nope! As long as it is not a big glaring error like main character name change that brings me out of the moment, I don't really care where the authors place their punctuation. The book grabbed me for the time I was reading it and had me looking for those books the visiting characters were in that I hadn't read of Ms. Silver's. And, I think that any author can live with that.

Looking forward the Cord's book and the continuation of this story line.

I was seriously confused with this one. Too much rambling about nothing. It was just to much inner dialogue and not enough dialogue between the characters. I thought it was kinda boring to be honest. Thank goodness it was on kindle unlimited or I would have been passed that I spent money on it.

I am addicted to Jordan Silver. She is a magnificent storyteller. It's a real hoot with the different bbfs in one book. This book has made me want to start rereading from the beginning, Lyon. Love this book!!!!

**Spoilers in this Review**
This is your warning.

Ok, well. I felt like this book was a bit like reading the thoughts of a crazy person. It was all over the place. Some parts of it were super kinky hot. But the parts that weren't were just a jumble of words. We didn't get a lot of details on why things were happening or how. And then it was this huge drama. And then it was over. It was hard for me to follow.

And, while I like the dynamic the two main characters had, I felt like the hero told the reader more than he told the heroine. Show me him telling her how their relationship will be, not just him telling me and her having no idea. It would have had a lot more impact.

The biker aspect was strange too. He rode a bike and that was about the extent of it. He certainly didn't trust his biker crew, which goes against everything I understand about the MC dynamic. It was very weird.

And, seriously? I don't want to hear about a 13.5 inch rod. Just sounds fake as all get out.

But, the hot parts were smokin. That's why it gets 3 stars.

I really enjoyed this book! I'm loving how Jordan tied her books together and also gave us a hint of their lives after their individual HEA's. I have to admit to wanting to know who is behind the slavery ring. Haven't been able to guess.

I liked the concept, and the beginning was good. But starting at the first sex scene, which was not hot at all, the book went downhill. From the terrible sentence structures to the sentences that made no sense at all it was just a mess. And the synopsis didn't indicate whether this was a book in a series, but characters were brought in as if we were supposed to know who they were. Then to change the pov to those characters in later chapters was weird. This book had potential, so it's a shame that it reads like a first draft. Not worth the money. Jordan Silver should be embarrassed that she produced such a poorly written book.

I absolutely loved this book from Jordan Silver. If you love a over the top alpha bad boy then this book is for you. Jordan Silver knows what makes her readers cream thier panties and Creed does that. He's takes no crap from anyone and will do anything for his baby girl. 9 years ago a old messed up man sold his daughter for his next fix and Creed stepped in. He made sure she had a good life or so he thought while he was off saving the country. One day she's all grown up and he realizes that she is the one for him but he bides his time until she's of age. Once she's 21 all bets are off and she will become his babygirl. There's some familiar faces that make appearances in Biker's Babygirl. It's the wet dream of every Jordan Silver reader when the hot guy alpha brigade shows up. Plenty of action, hot bedroom antics, breeding, and lots of alpha hotness in Biker's BabyGirl. Thank you Jordan Silver for writing one panty drenching hot book.

This book is nothing but tripe.Badly written and so repetitive didnt, well couldnt get myself interested enough to even finish it. Waste of money and want my money back. Really if the author of it is one of the stores most popular writers as stated on review then theres a lot of people who read rubbish.

This novel was not well organized. It was a struggle to finish. The characters are unappealing and the story repetitive. Poor editing, combined with a slow moving story contributes to unpleasant reading experience. It's not worth the $4.99 price. It's a shame there are so many 5 star review, as it's misleading. I'm wondering if we read the same book or if they read it, at all.

Meh. I really liked the premise of this story, and after reading several of this author's works, I thought I had the cadence of her writing down. Unfortunately, this felt all over the place - way too much descriptive thought process in the beginning, and then it peters off into sex (lots & lots of really hot sex, so if that's what you're looking for, this IS the book for you!), and then there's a really interesting story w/ what's going on w/ the girls. But the things that you want more description of (storyline wise) are skimmed over. I also didn't feel connected AT ALL to Jessie (Babygirl) despite her having a couple chapters from her POV. At points this felt like the author was trying to go for a Kristen Ashley vibe as far as giving us perspectives from various other characters from previous books who make cameo appearances. It fell flat for me, tho. :( There were bits I enjoyed, and I'll continue to look for gems in this author's work (there have been some of her stories I have absolutely LOVED - this just wasn't one of them). : )

Awful!!!!! This is the first book I ever asked for a refund . Aside from the constant F word use and speaking like an angry teen, he is way too controlling. Lets add the creep factor of him calling her his Baby Girl since he knew her since she was a child was disturbing. She was more childlike then an adult. Sorry no one willingly wants to take 13 plus inches especially a childlike 5ft nothing virgin. It is totally unrealistic because most adult full sized women would run the other way.

I was really disappointed by this book. I haven't managed to finish it and asked for refund. By third chapter I was asking myself why I had bought it in first place. The main hero supposed to be a hard biker, ex- soldier, but in reality he was weeping boy who overuse f* words. It was hard to digest.

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I have very mixed feelings about this book.

I like the older man/younger innocent woman type of read, I like Biker books with a strong tattooed alpha male so this sounded perfect for me.

But I didn’t like that he’d left her with her aunt without really checking everything out and while initially I appreciate he didn’t have the time but later when Jessica complained he had the time and the means but did nothing.

Did he even know at the time that Sal was in with a nasty group.

While he was waiting for Jessica to grow up he’d still continued to have sex, never considering that once he collected her and brought her back to him she’d be surrounded by women he’d slept with.

He has a eye watering thirteen and a half inch cock that is four inch in girth (think can of pop) and has a ladder going the full length of the underside shaft plus an Apadravya and a Prince Albert in the cockhead.

And Jessica is a virgin.

The first third of this book is about getting Jessica away from her aunt, the middle section is sex (I mean seriously she’s a virgin, he’s huge and yet they have sex constantly for days) to the point I was amazed she could even walk. The last part is strange because a kidnapping /breeding programme story is introduced but left open ended yet this book looks like a standalone so I’m not sure where the rest of the story comes in.

I didn’t like how he treated her at times (he’s certainly the king of double standards) or how he spoke to her at times but still I kept reading.

So there’s my mixed feelings.

Okay, against my better judgment I gave JS another try.

Started out kind of cute, gross but cute, where the H has had a crush on the h for years, and has been kinda celibate until she grows up. A modern day sexed up "Daddy-Long-Legs".

Okay, I am an idiot. But I went with it until we got to the H's admission of his 13.5" member. 13.5 inches. Uh, bye bye bye. Jean Webster, I am so sorry for dragging your name in here. Mea culpa.

D.N.F!

Out of here.

Really? 13.5 inches? That's longer than a piece of paper. I want to put this guy's guyness in a typewriter and write out a letter to Jordan Silver.

Dear Ms. Silver...

What do I say?

13.5inch members are not appealing. They. Are. Scary.

They are frightening AND laughable.

I want my money back, and this was Kindle Unlimited!

Jordan silver has done it for me.....again! This book just blew me away.

Creed basically gets stuck with Jessie when her father pretty much puts her up for adoption for the price of a drink. Creed is in the military so he leaves her with her aunt, visits when he can and ensures that she has everything she could wish for. When she hits 18, all of a sudden his view of her changes and he decides to stay away until she hits 21 to allow her to live her life........ish..... At the beginning he finds out that all isn't what he thought it was at her aunts and that things had been happening, bad things, so he goes and takes Jessie and then goes back to send a message to her aunt and her boyfriend. On top of this he now has her 3 days before her 21st and he is adamant that he's sticking to his 21st bday rule regardless.
As I said, this book blew me away. Here's this hard, brash biker who isn't afraid to say he is totally gone for Jessie, but he's also been living his life while he waits for her if you get what I mean, so their beginning isn't all roses and rainbows, his past bites him in the ass a couple times and add onto that the guilt over the reality of how Jessie lived whilst he stayed away and hardly visited. Even worse, Jessie tried to tell him things but he believed her aunt over her. That's got to eat away at you! But with true romance, the path to happiness and unicorns is never easy.
What I love love loved about this book is the change that JS has made in her writing, there's still an underlying message (like a lot of her books ie the gambler, seal team seven etc) that is prevalent in real life, there's angst, there's love, the bad stuff isn't just swept over- it's dealt with and she threw me completely by bringing in Colton Lyon, seal team seven, jake, steel.....it was amazing! We hit a plateau and all of a sudden, some of the hottest alphas ever to star in a book arrive and the beauty of it was- their introduction, places in the book, actions etc were seamless! Sometimes it can feel like a bit of a pantomime in a way when characters from other series are brought into each other's series and to have so many of them that were from so many different books........omg! But no, JS made it smooth, the story went through the roof and I sat there at the ending shaking my kindle and begging for more pages to appear.
As with all JS books, it arrived on my kindle and I inhaled it, but something about this book hit me hard and I had to reread it a couple times for that hardness to settle. Recent,y with JS books, coz of her change in writing, I find I have to read the books a couple of times so that I get all of the details and don't miss anything, and by reread number 3/4 I'd skipped past the OHS (oh holy sh&t) shockers and I was seeing it for the fantastic book that it was coz I could focus on it as a whole instead of different events that hit me hard and left me shocked.
So to put it mildly- I loved it. Something has changed in JS and whilst I loved and still love and reread her old books, her new way of writing never fails to have me sitting til dawn as soon as it's released reading and rereading.

If you haven't read it yet, you really really should. And if you haven't read seal team seven, Lyons crew, Anarchist, bad boy, man of Steele etc then trust me, after you read this book you'll be one clicking on those books.

I LOVED it. The goddess silver has struck again

I love the way Jordan silver writes. He storyline and her full descriptive view of the sex and passion shared about all parties involved. I love the way she brings characters from her other books together in this one. I hope there is a continuation here. Jordan you got me hooked I've read almost all of your books and that's because I have to work eat and sleep. Great job!

The 5 star reviews are mind boggling. This was a horribly written monologue by the H. No punctuation to speak of, hardly any action and a continuous stream of consciousness by the H, all dealing with how the h is his "baby" and how he wants to "f***ing f*** her." So many alpha characters introduced (apparently from previous books that I have not read) that I couldn't keep track of who was who and doing what. Truly horrible read. The other 1 star reviews are accurate...I question any review that gives this drivel more than one star. Do not buy.