The Rocker Who Savors Me (The Rocker Series Book 2)

I really liked that Jesse and Layla fell for each other. They we both very sweet people, but the personal time they have is very interesting. I found myself most interested in Drake and Lana, and will get the other books, so I can learn what is Drake's dark secret...

Sweet story but the author tells us more than she shows us. Dialogue, behavior, and emotion should be painted with words - a picture described - rather than dictated by words. Good stories reveal character and themes by painstakingly detailing events, moods and setting; this allows the reader to think and draw their own opinion and conclusions.

This product also needs serious copyediting. Spellcheck and Grammarcheck can only do so much! Terri, let me edit your next book before publishing!