Maiden to the Dragon #1 (Alpha Dragon Shifter Romance)

Miriam isn't prepared for love

The lord dragon isn't sure what he is in store for

When they meet in . . . he's . . . and she's . . . But then fate steps in with help from . . ., . . ., . . . ;)

Will they be together or in seperate worlds??

Enjoy!! ;)

The so called author is barely literate and too much of a cheapskate to pay a real editor. There are scads of editorial errors such as missing letters, incorrect word usage and poor punctuation. The so called plot is as thin as a miser's soup. The characters are one dimensional and entirely undeveloped. This dreck is a waste of anyone's time. Blah!

This was a sweet story. Unlike romance novels with all the heavy words of love. This was more like a sweet Fairy Tale. The Main characters Miriam and Dragon Lord Xander, they both seemed to be strong characters, just in different ways. As with most popular Fairy Tales, it had its HEA. I hope the author, Mac Flynn will write a full length novel. I would like to read more from this author.

Okay, for starters, I want to strangle Miriam. Talk about an obnoxious, self-centered, disappointing and stupid female protag. I get that the author launched her into this strange new realm. But if you’re going to play in the fantasy sandbox, the least you can do is find a better way of transitioning your characters into it rather than having them behave like a belligerent toddler. I legitimately cannot believe this story was published. Perhaps my literary expectations are too high, but this story seems to cater to the lowest common denominator. I had zero belief in her relationship with Xander, and though the connection between touched upon the slightest literary skill, it was mostly fluff with zero development. Someone please, help this poor author out.

This story has a good plot, strong main characters in Marian and Xander and all the elements of a wonderful tale. However, the typos and misplaced words like for example reading "he or him" when it should have been "she or her" and other mistakes were way too distracting!

Very short, but a nice read. Miriam was hilarious. Towards the end a little annoying. Xander is cute. I didn't really feel a connection between the main characters, but the story has potential. Lots of editing issues.

Excellent story that was way too short. The story was set up in a way that you were hooked from page one. Loved the H/h, they were good together. The only thing that I didn't like was that it was too short. The book had the potential to be a great novel.