Office Toy

This book is absolutely disgusting. I read the first chapter and then had to stop. I couldn't stomach it. The storyline is borderline sexual slavery / rape. I was disgusted and mortified that I had wasted my time with such trash. The title says it all. If you want to read about a girl getting manipulated, raped, and molested by three different men all at the same time, read this book. It's absolutely appalling. It is not tastefully written at all! It's literally what you would read or hear on the news about what a man would do when raping a child. I will never read anything by this author again. YUCK!

The main character is too much objectified. Maybe it's just an opinion, but as much as I love reading these types of books, this one I really didn't like. Although the story is written perfectly and flows nicely. So I can't judge the writing style

I really did not like this book. The description is what caught my eye, but reading it was so much.. different. It was hard to get through with my mind saying "really? are you serious?". It was too hard to suspend reality because the story just never took over my mind and senses.. and it's a series. Nope. No way will I read any more of this series or of this author. I can't make myself do it.

When I looked up this book I didn't realize there were 5 more books to the series. I can't remember if it was free or $.99. The remains 5 books are $2.99 each. Book 2 was very short and it was way over priced but not k owing this would not be the conclusion I bought it. By the end of book 2 I could care less what happened to Elle. If you want to spend the money be my guest but IMO it is a waste of money.

It's free. It's nicely written. It's erotic with skillful touches of BDSM and domination. It will make you wish your future interviews could be just like this one! I can't wait to read more from this writer.

I finished this pretty quickly, as the story is only about 37 pages long. I'll give a pretty big warning: the story goes to sex very, very quickly, so if you're looking for something with a big sweeping story line, this probably isn't the erotica you want. This is very much a "small bites" type of short story/chapter and focuses on getting out lead character undressed and at the ready. If you want short stories that put more of a focus on story than sex, you might want to check out some works such as Alison's Wonderland.

Now as far as the BDSM content goes, it's fairly light. There is some bondage and Elle is spanked and slapped. It's not very hard, as the slap is fairly light and the ruler is only applied to her thighs. Content-wise, I'd recommend this for people who are just starting to get into BDSM but aren't really ready for the insanely rough stuff or the non-con type of play. It's all consenting at this point, although it might flirt with harder stuff and non-con in the future. It gives off a few of those vibes as far as the non-con goes.

For sexual content, I really enjoyed this. This story hits a lot of my kinks (office play, light control, etc), so this probably played into it fairly heavily. As you can guess from the cover, oral has a more dominant role in this book than vaginal or anal, although Elle has all three in this book.

The only downfall is that unfortunately there isn't a lot of character buildup in this chapter. We're given a fairly rough layout of events and what to expect, but not a lot of development. (Elle falling for Cunningham, despite him being a "love-em-and-leave-em" type of guy, etc.) This sort of thing is to be expected from chapter erotica, but it will still leave some wishing that there was just a little more of the non-sex stuff to make everyone truly stand out. Comparisons to Fifty Shades will probably be inevitable, but even with the character development handicap the characters are still more likable than Ana and Christian. Not that that's difficult, mind you.

Now the price point as of this writing (2.99) will probably dissuade some readers. I'd recommend this piece, but perhaps as something you buy with your fellow erotica readers and perhaps loan each other on the Kindle. I'm looking forward to the author's future work, in any case.

Seriously?? This is how you go into a job interview? How pleasant - and the cover is just offensive. Boss number 1 is getting fellated while boss number 2 stands patiently for his turn. I can't imagine any man in business would expose himself - pun intended - to legal action, criminal complaints & the EEOC. I deleted this from my library, I just glad it was only 32 pages & I didn't spend any time or money on it.

Well there this book shows the reason why there are sexual harassment laws. The female lead character was a young 19 year old tossed into sexual dominant older men. The overall story isn't bad. There is a lot sex. The story does draw you in wanting to know what else is going to happen in the next books.

Barely passable wank bait, not worth much dollar wise. If you've ever wondered what an 'erotic tale' with chalk full of tropes and clichés looked like, this is for you. If I was you, I'd save my money to start a fire with and at least then you'd have a fire. Pass. Basically, Cleo Peitsche is a no-go at this station.

I quit reading it very early on. It is very graphic and I could not finish it. It was just too much. The book is not believable. and I only read a little of it. I am not sure I can give this a review. I was sickened by it very early on. I am not a prude either.

I did not enjoy this book.
Everyone has different taste in books so it's up to you.
Sleezy, let everyone do you book. The men are sex hounds who just want to do whatever they want to this girl. She liked it but ehhhh, not a thing for me.

this is not what I was expecting even from the decription. Really short and just left a great deal to be desired. First of this author not sure if will read another from her but would not mind looking again.

Interesting beginning & also typical of billionaire Dom (boss) short erotica. Girl gets passed around in the office or is going to get passed around. They pretty much make her into their office slut.

Man did I hate this story. It screamed not only of Sexual harrassment, but also group Sexual harrassment. I love erotic fiction, but this was just deeply offensive. Please, please don't read this terrible book.

Originally Reviewed on The Bewitching Bibliophile book blog. Received from the author/publisher in exchange for an honest review. This didn't influence my review or rating.

What the F**k did I just read?? It's only 27 pages, how did, you know what?? This is a great porno style book. What I mean is.. thin reason for being there then all of a sudden the characters are having wild raunchy group sex.

If you just read the sex scenes it wasn't that bad, just as long as you didn't think about how she got there or worry about who some of the participants are supposed to be. If that's what you're looking for, look no further, you have found it.

I so didn't see this coming because I don't like to read reviews before I read a book so not to be influenced. This was a total cover pick, I didn't want to read the premise and be disappointed, yeah that didn't work, I must admit that the cover is gorgeous; a kneeling submissive, yeah totally caught me,

Erotica Rating is 3 Steamy Stars, I would only read it for the erotic scenes, the 'plot' isn't worth it. If this was to be a contemporary romance?? I would hope to the gods above she was going to the police. No madam, not my style at all. This is apparently a serial book, where they put out several pages at a time, nope I have no desire to continue with this series.
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Have you read this?? What did you think??

I rarely review erotica. I made an exception for Fifty Shades of Grey just because EVERYBODY was talking about it so I wanted to see what all the fuss was about. But it was just as poorly written as people said it was, so it annoyed me. I hate agreeing to review a book only to realize almost from the beginning that it's going to be terrible, because then I feel obligated to finish reading it, even though I'm not enjoying it.

But that's not the real reason I don't review erotica. The real reason isn't that I'm afraid I won't like a book; it's that I'm afraid I will. Because then I'd have to admit which ones I liked and that's embarrassing, you guys. Erotica doesn't make me blush but talking about it does.

I'm going to ease into this review. First, I'll start by pointing out that this is actually a short story, not a book. And it's the first in the Office Toy series. It wasn't full of ridiculous writing (like people complained about with Fifty Shades, for instance). It is, as promised, an erotic story of a job interview that turns sexual very quickly.

Okay, I admit it. I enjoyed this story. I have a few dozen books on my shelf that have been waiting for reviews for months, but I read and reviewed this one within 24 hours of requesting it. It was good and I'll probably read more from this author. Only I don't want to talk about it because it makes me blush.

There was very little in the way of development of the main character, Elle, all you really learn about her is that she likes sex, her mother lives with her, she has a sister, and she graduated six months ago. As someone who seems to focus on the characters in a book more than anything else, I don't think that this one was really for me.

The men in the book, the people that were supposed to be working, and yet seemed to have beds, bondage equipment and baths in their office, were similarly not particularly developed. And the fact that they did just seem interested in sex with Elle rather than anything else kind of detracted from them as characters.

It was steaming hot, like seriously could feel the heat coming out of the screen. The wildest interview you will ever have!

The main thing that was going for this book, was that the writing style flowed really well. Though if you're not wanting a book that is basically written porn, then this isn't the book for you.

This book was a fun read , It quickly caught my attention when you learn about elle's challenges and the very extraordinary job interview she goes on . Elle really wants to get this job and she has brought her portfolio with her. When she arrives at the job interview she is surprised by the looks of the company she wants to work for. The pictures that hang on the wall are of some very beautiful and enticing men. She knows she shouldn't feel this way in the interview but she does. Its been a long time since she has felt this way with all of the junk she has going on in her personal life.

You first meet Nolan the receptionist of this firm first. He is rude to her and makes here feel very uncomfortable. You then meet Cunningham who will be one of her bosses along with Jonathan. Cunnigham is a very gorgeous man he start out the interview by looking up and down to see if he likes how she looks. Cunningham asked her if she was willing to anything to get this job. She replies yes. Wait till she finds out what she is in for.

This book was a fun and fast read. I believe the author has written this book with the interest in wanting you the reader follow her onto other books she is writing in this series. I found it was an easy read that i was able to read\finish in one sitting. The BDSM scenes were what you would expect in this type of book. I found the author to be very descriptive and detailed in explanations of the looks of the scenes and the characters themselves.

I would recommend this to readers who enjoy BDMS Erotic Romance books. It will interesting to see how the other books that follow in this series turn out.

I give this book a three stars out of five.

I received this book as an ARC from the author via Netgalley . This is my honest review.

So where I read this book was a mistake. Do not I repeat DO NOT read this at work! That was a terrible idea on my part. This book had me turned inside out over some of the things they did. Elle was a lucky woman to be getting the attention she received. I am not into sharing never have been but reading about it doesn't faze me.
Elle goes in for an interview and just like everyone else she dresses nicely and comes with her portfolio and her best smile. What she doesn't know is that the interview isn't just for a job it's also for her bosses' pleasure. Enter Cunningham tall and sexy, mouthwatering sexy. Her jaw drops in more ways than one.
This interview is an experience that no one is prepared for. Elle must be able to take anything handed to her and do as she's told. This is where it gets hot and then hotter.
I enjoyed this short graphic erotic story I won't like I am looking forward to the next book to see what else happens. The only downfall was the lack of character build up. There were a few things that were described or explained but not enough. 4/5

Review of Office Toy by Cleo Peitsche
Book Provided by publisher for honest review.
Office Toy is an erotic short that features MFMM action. If you are looking for a good quickie you have found it with Office Toy. There isn't much "story" to it, but what it lacks in story it makes up for in amazingly hot smut. Probably one of the best four-way sex scenes I have come across. I liked the dynamics between the three men, each vying for their place in the pecking order. Each of them are completely different in their approach to Elle, however, they are all dominant.
Elle is a natural submissive and while the interview may have taken an unexpected turn, she definitely doesn't feel slighted in the least. Cunningham, Jonathan, and Nolan tap into her secret desires and turn her fantasies into reality. I give this book two stars for storyline (since it's mostly lacking substance, however that is obviously NOT what this one is about) and I give it 4 drenched panties. While I normally wouldn't suggest a book that is so short, but it is totally worth it if you are looking for something to... ahem... rev up your motor.
Review by the Head Whore at Mommy's a Book Whore.
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Could this book be anymore sexually explicit.

This book was a steamy, pulse rising sexy read in just a few short pages. Just love that. Straight to point and sex driven like crazy. Basically the female lead engages in a very comprising sexual situation in her new boss's office after telling him she would do anything for the job. Welllll she did and then some. I'm no virgin when it comes to this kind of a read. The author's description of this scene was heart bounding. I was definitely blushing and had my ears turning beet red! The men were just oozing alpha as they dominated Elle. And don't let Elle fool you, she is not some shy submissive. She is a minx no doubt. Can't wait to see what's in store for these characters in the next book.

If you want a steamy short read without all the hoopla. Then this is your book! Out of a 5, I'm giving this book 5 stars! I liked it a lot.

I received this arc from the publisher via NetGalle

Lisa Hines's review Jul 09, 13 · edit
3 of 5 stars
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Read on July 08, 2013, read count: 1

Um, Holy Crap!?!
I was morbidly engrossed in this short story. I mean who goes into a job interview and accepts this **treatment** as part of the interview process? Apparently Elle does. This was dirty, and erotic, and pornographic.

I kinda liked it.
Judge me if you must, but I feel I have to be honest...
Anyway - I may find myself reading more from Cleo Peitsche, probably...

Okay, definitely, I will!!!

This short consists of one scene. Elle has a job interview with an advertising firm that tue=rns out a little different then she planned. But since she said she would do anything for the job she has to prove it. But she doesn't mind. Since her meddling mother has been staying with her she hasn't had a big "O" in a while so she is excited to prove how much she wants the job.

This is great quickie if you want to read a bit of smut. It also leaves you wanting to know more about the characters. I look forward to the next book.

Review by Michelle

**Free Copy provided for an honest review**
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This was just what you need for a long bubble bath... good, HOT, quick read.

That being said... it really makes me MAD when I read a book this SHORT and I'm asked to pay the same price for a book three times it's length. I HATE that there is a book 2... that sucks! This is yet another time when someone was more interested in making money over the craft. Two books NOT needed! Book series like these are labeled "mini-series books" for me... you tune in the first night but by the second night there are other shows you want to watch and the first night didn't really make you WANT to watch the rest of the nights. I don't think that I will be purchasing the second book... not worth finding out what happens next.

If you go in expecting this to be a full story or a novel, you will very disappointed. It's not. It's one scene that happens for Elle's job interview. But if your just looking for a short story, then this one is very good and very hot.

After submitting to a psychologists evaluation and bloodwork, Elle goes in for the job interview at an advertising agency. And boy, what an interview! Elle has a very intimate meeting with her boss, .....his business parter, .....and the receptionist.

This is a great story for fans of erotica. Who doesn't fantasize about being thrown down on the conference room table by the sexy boss? It's well written and fun. I'd recommend it.

This short, short story accomplishes quite a lot in a few pages. We get who Elle is, a bit of her background as to why she might even consider the arrangement offered by her new employers and that she has strong submissive tendencies. Her new employers don't waste anytime initiating her in the new job.

The story was also effective in defining the personalities and roles of Brian Cunningham and Jonathan Arrow, the partners of the firm, along with Nolan the receptionist. While this series may evolve into an erotic romance, it's clearly not the objective of this first installment. It is pure ménage fantasy and it is all from Elle's point of view. Even so, her perspective is so well written you get the dynamics of each of the men's personalities and how she reacts to each. The sex is explicit and hot.

I was extremely surprised that so much could be accomplished in less than 30 pages. Other reviewers may have been looking for romance and their ratings reflect that. It's puzzling because the description of this story doesn't even allude to that. As erotica, it's pretty awesome. I'm really looking forward to where this leads.

(I received an ARC from NetGalley)

If you are looking for a quick hot read, this is it!! If you want a believable story or plot you are not going to find it, but it will still be a good short read. In this book Elle’s job interview starts with her perspective boss (Cunningham) throwing away her cheap clothes and sending his assistant to buy new outfits. (I wish that were true. I would go on lots of job interviews.) He’s got her naked, so of course he ends up with her on the desk. There is no guessing in the plot, it's pretty predictable. She eventually is "introduced" to the other business partner, and the book gets hotter. The plot is not really believable but boy does this book have intrigue and steam to make up for that!!

It is very short, but it really packs a lot of action into a few pages. I was impressed with Cleo Peitsche. I will be looking for more of her work. All I can say is.. "Wow!"

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Description: Elle’s job interview starts with Cunningham throwing away her cheap clothes and sending his assistant to buy new outfits. He’s got her naked, so of course he’ll lay her out on the conference table and claim her mouth. Soon Elle is trussed up, all of her holes stretched full while three hot men have their wicked way.
She loves her first tastes of liberated, naughty sex. But she’d better not start falling for her boss—no matter how safe he makes her feel—because while office sex is encouraged, romance is strictly forbidden.

Publication Date: December 1, 2012

Review: I received this book from NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for my honest opinion.

Hummmm....how did I feel about this book???? I have to say that it was just okay. Although it was a short book I felt like the author could have put a little more into it. For some reason here lately I have been getting this books to read and they are not turning out to be what I am expecting. Yes the description of the book says that during her interview she gets naked quickly, but as I was reading this I wasn't sure how I was feeling about it. She comes in and the guy behind the receptionist desk is rude, then when she is in her interview she is practically immediately told to get naked.....I mean hello....isn't she at all concerned about this unexpected change of events? Yes the author expresses her feelings a little here, but not enough for me to connect with the character at all. Then all of a sudden she is have a four way...granted the guys are all hot, but wow!!! It was so out of the normal....The book was just totally unbelievable. Now I don't always have to connect to the characters to enjoy a book , but it does make it more enjoyable for me when I do. I was curious as to what would happen next so I did get the sample of the next book through the store, but it was a little ridiculous so I didn't spend my money on it. I rated this with two stars.

Complimentary Review Copy Provided by Publisher Through NetGalley . I'm afraid I very quickly got bored with this story. It started out alright and I was interested in Elle and why she was interviewing for a job (which is never actually named), that is until she went in for that interview and the whole thing turned into sex, sex, sex and no storyline at all. It would have been a lot better for the sex to have at least been toned down with a little background on the guys or a whole lot of world building to explain why her interview turned out the way it did. Unfortunately it read to me more like guy porn I've seen in mags like Fiesta or Mayfair. I would not recommend this to anyone who likes a good story with their sex scenes.

I really wanted to like this book. The premise sounded interesting. Then, I started reading. In the beginning, I wanted to know more about Elle and the relationship between her and her mother. Then, I wanted to know more about Elle and how she ended up working 2 part time jobs instead of a job in advertising. When she went to the job interview, I found the scenes with Nolan a bit interesting and was curious why he was sabotaging her coffee and felt for her when she got caught tossing it into the plastic plant.

As the she interviewed for the job, all I could think was, "this isn't like any job interview I ever had." In the end, it was a quick read, but kind of boring. The sex scene wasn't that great and I couldn't figure out why she agreed to the 3rd person in the first place.

I felt like I basically read the free sample for a story.

Note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

If you like erotica, this is well written erotica with the reader in a female leads head who is interesting and enough of a backstory to make the book more than just sex.

However, this is a serial and I really don't like serials all that much. It feels a little bit like pay by the sex scene. I would have liked this book better as erotica if it was all one book ala early Emma Holly's Black Lace years.

This short is well written, quick and hot but not very emotional.

I was given this book for my honest review so there you have it.

It is a quick steamy and hot read. As long as you don't go into this book expecting an elaborate story, it is really enjoyable.
The story is told quickly...Elle goes in for a job interview, gets the job and way more than she could have hoped for. The job interview ends in a hot, naughty sex session...not just with her new boss but also two other colleagues. There is some serious M/F/M/M action going on and quite a bit of BDSM stuff. It is hot, it is dirty and it is sexy. If this stuff offends you, don't read.
I enjoyed the book.

This novella could definitely have benefited from a few more pages. As erotica goes, it was a fast read with a light BDSM element. The sex scenes started early and occurred often, but the characters weren't as defined as I would have liked. Perhaps the novella style is not for me, I just wanted something more in the way of emotional connection to the characters.
I rated it 3 stars because though well written, it wasn't enough for me.
*I received my copy from NetGalley.com in exchange for an honest review.

Office Toy is a short few pages (19) telling of the introduction of a secretary to a BDSM type of environment. There are future stories as well but I think I would have enjoyed this more if it had more pages. It felt like an excerpt from a book rather than a self contained story.

The writing is decent, it's steamy, and the characters make intelligent decisions (psychology of the secretary applicant, disease control, personality control). Hopefully, this will all be compiled into a book.

This was a very very quick read. Not bad but the sex scene just wasn't compelling enough for me. I needed something more.
Also, the setting is just crazy-and there were no non-disclosure agreements do it wasn't a true BDSM theme. There was no buildup of trust, just 'hi, I'm your new boss, take your clothes off and let us have you'. Even the receptionist she obviously didn't trust...

The author sent me a copy of this story, but did not request a review. All view presented are my honest opinion of the manuscript.

Elle is a young graphic artist on a job interview. She agrees that she will do anything to get the job. And she does everything asked of her including a three way with the two bosses and hot male receptionist. The sex is graphic, super sizzling hot and when the interview is over, she realizes that she needs to keep it all fun and not get emotionally involved to keep her new job she desperately needs. The action was burning the Kindle and if you want a very hot story to get you in the mood, this is it...

I received a copy of this book for netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Elle goes to a job interview and gets more than she bargained for and her sexual appetite met for the first time ever.

This was a very short erotic BDSM with m/m/m/f situations. It was a steamy quick read and is the first short story in the series

Very short but wow it was sexy. Dominance, several partners and extreme sexual positions that's what this book has. The characters you don't get to know much about except Cunningham mostly is the Alpha and runs the show and his partner and receptionist follow his commands but overall hot as hell sex.

I was very intrigued by the description of the books as well as the reviews. However, all 6 books combined are only 275 pages at a cost of $20. Why doesn’t the author bundle them for the price of $3.99? I’m sorry but I won’t over pay for a series.

This book and its review is not safe for anyone under the age of 18 and definitely not safe for work. I love to read erotica and erotica romance. This to me was a scene from a much larger pornographic story. It was aggressive and filled with BDSM, and let me just say this book would be better suited if I read it with my partner... in bed. If you like a whole lot of yummy sex and not an information dump then this is the book for you!

** spoiler alert **

Book provided by NetGalley for an honest review.

Elle goes in for a job interview and ends up in a threesome with the office Dominantes. It seems that her therapy session, which she took before the interview, provided them with the information that she would be open to being a submissive.

My problem isn't with the book. It's just that it all seemed to clinical. I didn't get any emotion, not even from Elle. She wasn't scared, thrilled, excited, just seemed to go with the flow. And since it was a novella, I wasn't able to get enough from any of the guys to know what they wanted from her other than sex.

Just wasn't really for me.

If you enjoy reading Shayla Black books, they will love asboutely love reading Cleo books! This book is sooo hot hot hot. It has so much dirty talk that it will make everyone blush while reading the books. I adore the characters so much that it makes me want to read rest of the series in order to find out what happen. A definitely page turner!

The author sent me a copy of this story, my views are my honest opinion of the manuscript.

A job interview like none I ever had. One woman trying to land a job finds the interviewing possess to be a very binding and filling experience. The writing and story development was as enjoyable to read as was the very hot and exciting sex scenes. I loved this story from beginning to end