The Vampire from Hell (Part 1) - The Beginning

I really liked this book. A different kind of vampire story with lots of twist and turns. I like the fact that she had some problems being a vampire, and it was not too obvious to here friends what she really needed to survive.

I loved the book, the shock that her father killed her mother and her being human was my favorite part. I just hated that her father was already killed so quickly and easily.
Though I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait for the next book. You're great Ally Thomas, I've never read about a vampire from hell. I love the imagination. Thanks so much.

What better combination to have than to be scarred and sensually aroused. The whole setting is ingenious, taking place between Reality, Hell and Heaven. And in Hell or Heaven the characters still need to deal with the challenges of everyday life. And the top guns being taken prisoners by the one whose name should be unmentioned? The plot is brewing.

I liked the IDEA of reading about the daughter of Satan but it was missing something. A little more SEX would have made it a little more exciting. We all know that there is nothing more sexxier then a beefcake Vampire or Angel.

Good book for teens who like the vampire stories. Character is likable and easy to relate to. Nice that their is no sexual stuff to read through. Our teens are bombarded with enough of that. I am an adult and enjoyed it.

The partial available in what I got doesn't really allow me enough to get excited about the story or give an opinion on the writing. I was confused as it gave me partials to other parts also, threw me off and unfortunately lost my interest.

I would recommend this book to people 13 and over this book is freaking awesome .I love this book when I first got it I thought it would be wack but than when I first read the first chapter in was hooked .

The Vampire from Hell (Part 1) is an exceptional book. It possesses problems as most books do; the extended ending for example; the content is equivalent to that of the actual book and just added about 10 more paragraphs. The book is definitely not the best but not the worst... Oh! I forgot to mention over half of the book is excerpts from the other 2 books in the series. Do not be disappointed when you finish the book in 10 minutes...

I would recommend this book to people 13 and over this book is freaking awesome .I love this book when I first got it I thought it would be wack but than when I first read the first chapter in was hooked .

The Vampire from Hell (Part 1) is an exceptional book. It possesses problems as most books do; the extended ending for example; the content is equivalent to that of the actual book and just added about 10 more paragraphs. The book is definitely not the best but not the worst... Oh! I forgot to mention over half of the book is excerpts from the other 2 books in the series. Do not be disappointed when you finish the book in 10 minutes...

I got 25% through and was entirely unable to continue. The story moves too fast, then too slow, then too fast, then stagnates- and that's just in the first 25%. I don't know what happens at the end, but I fully hope that "Rayea" dies. She is an entirely unlikeable character, a "vampire from hell," who loves humans despite the fact that this gets her in bad with her father, Satan. No joke, Satan is her father. Spoiler alert, Satan's seed is a vampire who loves humans, has an iPhone, and uses facebook.
Do yourself the favor and don't download this book. Waste of an hour facepalming over the first four chapters.

The story itself was written in a prose better suited for a 10 year old girl, but the content was pure filth. Reading the first chapter, I would have told my niece it was more her style than mine. Thankfully I read further, because the sexual content was absolute porn. The storyline was very offensive to me as well. I'm sure there are people who might enjoy this... if you like strong sexual scenes, read at a third grade level, and have no Christian influence at all, this just might be the book for you.

Unfortunately, writing a story requires a lot of work. It's not just having a good idea that matters, but the building of the story around the idea, and the story is heavily disappointing. In fact there is almost no "story".

There is a beginning, which is somehow passable, but the rest of the book is just boring and unimaginative.

And speaking of beginning - why include "normal" ending, and then right afterwards include the "extended" version as a bonus.
If this is a final general available book, why not choose ONE and keep the flow intact. It might be ok when sending to an editor or friend with question which option is better.

There are some questions that the very very modern setup of hell presents, for example:

How in the hell do you get the items you bought on eBay or any other internet place ? I mean seriously - not only that it gets delivered to the specific "demon" but also that the rest of hell is not aware of this ?

Who is the mobile operator in hell ?

How the hell is hell connected to the internet - I mean from the technical point of view ?

But in this book things just "are". Without any background, any explanation , anything.

You know, I could continue pointing out the things that I didn't like, but in the end, I do not intend to spend more time writing the review than reading the original book did.

The one good point is that it was free, unless counting the ~1h of reading time.

If anything is to be made of this series/idea then a lot of work is needed.

...when I relized the book was done. I immediately looked for part 2. Admittedly, this isnt the greatest thing since sliced bread. BUT it has a very interesting plot. I'm very curious to see where it goes. Hopefully part 2 will be out soon, & also free. Some people may knock it for being so simple, but thats not always a bad thing. I myself read to relax. And a complicated book does not help me relax. Its free just try it!