A Dystopian Fairy Tale (The Crimson Fold Book 1) - Until Midnight

This is a great twist on Cinderella and the Hunger Games! It is similar because Clara is chosen to go to the ball over her step sister, but once she attends it becomes mush bigger and more dangerous than a just any regular ball. I am voluntarily leaving my review after reading this arc.

Until Midnight is Hunger Games meets The Selection meets Twilight. So much of this felt stolen from Hunger Games that it made me upset. It's poorly edited, which is hard for me to overlook, and the story is rushed, with no real development. The "twist" could have been hinted at earlier, so that it actually made sense with the story, instead of something just randomly thrown in at the end. Every character, even Clara, was incredibly undeveloped. There was no history, no emotional connection, no attachment. I kept trying to push my way through the story and was about to give up when I realized I was already 3/4 of the way done, so I persevered. I'm glad I did, so that I could get the full effect of the point of the book. I hope for the readers that the other books in the series are better developed and better edited.

Was ready interested in reading this book but I, like many others, received the wrong book. The first chapter was about Clara and then after that it changed to Asher and Zoe. I still enjoyed the book but would like to receive the book I thought it was buying. Hope it can be fixed

I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the second part! There was a mix-up with the pre-order, and the author fixed the issue quickly. And I'm so glad she did! I loved the "Hunger Games" meets "Cinderella," two stories I enjoy.

This book is suspenseful, interesting, and really draws you in! It leave you wanting more! I am so happy i one-clicked ordered it! This author leaves each book with the purpose of wanted to read the next book!

I saw this book on Facebook and thought it sounded like a fun book to read. I found myself wanting to reading it every chance I got. I would have liked a little bit more character development, but I enjoyed it.

This is a great twist on Cinderella and the Hunger Games! It is similar because Clara is chosen to go to the ball over her step sister, but once she attends it becomes mush bigger and more dangerous than a just any regular ball. I am voluntarily leaving my review after reading this arc.

Until Midnight is Hunger Games meets The Selection meets Twilight. So much of this felt stolen from Hunger Games that it made me upset. It's poorly edited, which is hard for me to overlook, and the story is rushed, with no real development. The "twist" could have been hinted at earlier, so that it actually made sense with the story, instead of something just randomly thrown in at the end. Every character, even Clara, was incredibly undeveloped. There was no history, no emotional connection, no attachment. I kept trying to push my way through the story and was about to give up when I realized I was already 3/4 of the way done, so I persevered. I'm glad I did, so that I could get the full effect of the point of the book. I hope for the readers that the other books in the series are better developed and better edited.

Was ready interested in reading this book but I, like many others, received the wrong book. The first chapter was about Clara and then after that it changed to Asher and Zoe. I still enjoyed the book but would like to receive the book I thought it was buying. Hope it can be fixed

I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the second part! There was a mix-up with the pre-order, and the author fixed the issue quickly. And I'm so glad she did! I loved the "Hunger Games" meets "Cinderella," two stories I enjoy.

This book is suspenseful, interesting, and really draws you in! It leave you wanting more! I am so happy i one-clicked ordered it! This author leaves each book with the purpose of wanted to read the next book!

I saw this book on Facebook and thought it sounded like a fun book to read. I found myself wanting to reading it every chance I got. I would have liked a little bit more character development, but I enjoyed it.

I was really excited about this book. I even bought it before it was released (luckily only for .99 cents). But there are literally as many grammatical errors are there is in twilight. The word “be” missing here, commas in the wrong place or missing everywhere, and phrases with incorrect words. It was pain to get through chapter one. ? I can’t.

The second chapter is a completely different book. the store gave me a refund for this issue but I didn't feel like buying it for more $ if that first chapter was legit.