Pillbillies

The book seemed interesting at the start with promising story but it fizzled out midway. I was specially interested in the story as I had recently visited Poconos and was looking forward to reading something about it. However the story line seems to be going everywhere. The character's motivation seems to be conflicting and the plot twists seems forced. I would have been fine had this been a complete story but the story just leaves the reader hanging especially when it seemed that there was something happening. I don't care about the characters that great that I will wait for the sequel. The writing seems to be fine though. I just wish it was a complete story!

The spelling, grammar, & punctuation errors distracted from the story too much for me to bother even finishing it. The plot has potential, but have it gone over by a professional copy editor & try again.