#1, Take Me: The Untouchables

Interesting characters that hit the ground running from the first page to the last.
A hot, steamy read that left me satified but wanting more
On the downside, several editing corrections needed.
I had to get over it, move on and enjoy the story.
I will read and fully anticipate enjoying other books by this author.

this is my first time reading this author, I love the characters and their stories. I was not ready for the story to end, I bought the other two books in the series before even finishing the first book. can't wait for the fourth book!

While not terrible it really should have been a lot better than it was
So much sex, the scenes became almost boring. And when Dom lied to her just to her just to get in her pants... meh, I lost interest. If you like a lot of sex and little plot, then you might like this one.

I read the Bellum Sisters series and loved all of them great stories. I was a little disappointed in this one because the editing was not very good. Key moments had stuff missing and some didn't make sense. I would recommend this author to anyone won't stop reading. Also loved the Katagan series.

This story was a good concept but seemed just thrown together. It was full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, poor word choices, spelling errors, and just plain bad sentence structure. I am an amateur writer (so definitely NOT an expert), but I would never have sent a piece of my writing to be published with this many errors. This could not possibly been touched by an editor. These errors made the story difficult and frustrating to read.

At one point the heroine is described as being 75 years old and petite. At other points she is "tall for a woman" and older than 100. Which is it? It is difficult to keep a picture of the character in my mind when the details provided by the author keep changing.

The author uses the word "were" as an abbreviation for werewolf. This makes it difficult to read the sentence. It looks like the word were (as in past tense of are) has been randomly thrown into the sentence. Every time this happened, I had to reread the sentence. Better words would include: werewolf, wolf, or alpha.

I really could not fall in love with the hero and heroine. They just had too many character flaws. Don't get me wrong. Flawed character usually make you love them more but these character flaws were a turn off. The characters came off as selfish and manipulative people who were willing to lie to get what they want. I expect these traits in the antagonist but not the hero and heroine. I fell in love with the secondary characters. I found myself wanting to know the stories of Beth, Lucas, Gray, Vas, Julianna, Diane Blackmore and even Zeke more than the story of the main characters.

This is the first book that I have read from this author and I would not recommend her based on this book. Since there are so many good reviews for this author, I may read another of her books to see if this one was just a bad fluke.

Enjoyable reading. Very erotic. Great love story about a powerful family, who also happen to be Vampires. I wanted the next book to be a continuation of this one, but it's about one of the other brothers.

I enjoyed the book, but both the main characters needed to figure out what they wanted. There was a lot of jumping around with their choices towards each other even though they felt a profound connection. There was def some very hot sex scenes! It did need more proofreading and editing.

I just recently started reading T A Grey's books. The story lines are great. A nd her characters are good. Reading her book has become my bee favorite pastime. I will read a few more of her book to make sure she stays true to her fans. I LIKE HER.

Wow! I really enjoyed this book! Great story line and I loved that their was no 'boring' parts in it. I really feel like the characters grew as the story went along. Great read! Also the chemistry between felicity and Dominic was hot!!

This free book was good. As usual, Grey develops the story and characters well. Action packed from the beginning. Lots of heat, sexual tension. Lots of sex. There were several typos and, in my opinion too much unnecessarily long drawn out descriptions.

OMG I freaking absolutely loved this book. It hits my genre right on! This book has the hot steamy sex scenes, hot steamy alpha male Vampire and the emotions that bring an amazing book together! 10 + stars for this book and I can't wait to read book 2!

Great paranormal romance. Loved the interaction between felicity and Dominic! Will be looking for the next book and hopefully a book about Beth and Lucas. Would like to hear more from Zeke....yup I said it, there is a story there.

This book read like a first draft, not a finished work. There were way too many sentences that made no sense, repeated words or phrases, etc. The shame of it is, the story actually was not half bad, but the poor writing/editing ruined it.