Keep (Romanian Mob Chronicles Book 1)

I loved reading Vasile and Fawn's story. I finished this book in one sitting.I could not put this book down. It had romance and suspense. I just wished that it was longer. I can't wait to read the nesxt installment.

I enjoyed this story of Fawn and Vasile very much. The book is a bit too short for my liking and for the price. That aside i still didn't feel any regret over the money spent. The story was fast paced which could be both good and bad, depending. It was well written and had me wanting more at the end.

This looks like it could be the beginning of something beautiful. I was impressed with how well this book was put together. It was fast paced but not to the point of feeling rushed and it kept my attention the entire read. I will definitely be reading the next one asap.

The author writes exceptional well and tells an awesome story that draws you in. I enjoy alpha male characters so this particularly appeals to me. Publishing house did their jobs as well. Other houses and editor's could learn from this team. Terrific book Ms. Blue!!!

Loved this story, I only wished it would have delved in Fawn's past, to give readers an idea of what made her stay in the situation she was in. Also the jumping ahead by months made the story a bit rushed in my opinion. All in all a great story, looking for to Sorin and Esther butting heads again

I purchased this story after sampling it because I thought it was interesting…and it was only 99 cents. It pains me, not really, to say that I was wrong. I don’t know what’s going in this story, and I wonder if the author does.

Who are these characters, and why should I care about them? These questions could have been answered if the author had taken time to write some exposition. Fawn makes comments about not being the best judge of characters on several occasions. And yet, outside of her relationship with Malcolm (or whoever) we don’t know if she’s made bad choices before. We don’t know why she was with him or what happened in her past to make her date a man like him? Why doesn't Sorin date and how long has his father been dead? Some of these questions should have already been answered within the first half of the story because without them I don't know the character's motivation. At this point, I don't care about these characters and that's not going to change.

I understand why Vasile took Fawn, but there’s not enough interaction between the two of them to convince me he’s starting to feel something more than a hard on for her. Also, Vasile is supposed to be this intelligent, street-smart guy, so why is he having unprotected sex with a woman who, until recently, was sleeping with a man he believes is slime?

The author has failed to lay enough groundwork to make me believe that these people are falling in love with each other. I’m not even convinced that they’re all that hot for each other. I have NO idea what Fawn looks like. She has brown skin, big boobs, large hips and a big but. Is she a plus sized or does she have an hourglass figure? It would help if she’d given me some idea of her waist and stomach in proportion with the rest of her. Oh, and according to Vasile, she made up of hills and valleys.

Lastly, the narrative changes can be very abrupt at times, so much so that it feels like whiplash. I wish this story were written in third person, but I fear there would probably be even less information. There really isn’t much of a story here. The internal dialogue is repetitive, events happen out of the blue with out any previous indication that something was going it: Natasha is in love with Sorin (did I miss something) or Victor (or whoever) is selling drugs against Vasile’s command (say what now).

I do apologize if this sounds harsh, but this story annoyed me. Also, I really didn't intend to write this much.