WHAT HAPPENS IN THIS HOUSE

This read overall was good. The storyline was OK and had potential, but it just jumps all over the place. Some parts were extremely far fetched, like the portion with the son and then introducing quickly his story without elaborating on any of the main characters. I do like the paranormal aspect introduced. It was a very different element that aided in adding further interest in this read, but this could have been worked on longer.

I won't read the second, but hopefully it was proofread by someone with a basic understanding of the difference between your and you're. Again, the story has plenty of potential and with the right amount of time and patience invested in it could definitely have been a 5 star read.

The lack of proof reading before going to press was a huge distraction from the story.Capitalization, misspelling of words, incorrect punctuation, lack of even paragraphs caused sentences to be incomplete. A real disservice to the author to not have a professional editor. ?

This was the strangest story ever with no real ending, endless typos and hard to follow dialogue. I read to the end expecting it to get better but the 6 or so story lines never did come to a conclusion.

This started off decently. Went downhill from there. Thoughts aren't finished. Bounced all over the place. Towards the end it just went crazy and I wouldn't bother reading anything else by this author.

Good storyline but the editing was trash. I wanted to weekl quit first page because of it. Glad I didn't because it embedde ended up being good. Needs a lot of work. Pay me I'll make your books better.