New Girl: A Lesbian Erotica Short Story

Liz and Nina are teammates on a volleyball team when Liz was struck by the ball hit by an opponent while she was admiring Nina's legs. Later on, when Nina shows concern for her teammate, Liz decides to do something about her fascination by sharing an intimate encounter with Nina. It is Nina's first intimate encounter with another woman.

There isn't much more to the story as there is little character development, background information or other such details. However, the author leads the reader into the minds of both women and their emotions and feelings. These are described as well as the physical attraction and sexual encounter. This is a short story that does pack a lot even though there is a lack of depth to the characters.

The pace of this story is also good as it didn't feel rushed as some very short stories can feel. The sex scene is very intense and the reader feels Nina's trepidation and ecstasy at the same time. However I did feel the build up was a bit hokey-an injury because a plate was sexually attracted to a teammate? I would have also liked to learn a little more about Liz and Nina but what was written was very good.

If you want a short hot erotic read, this is a very good choice by an author who writes lesbian sexual fantasies well.

Another great book by an intriguing author. New Girl took me being the scenes of what goes on behind closed doors of a professional volley ball team. It opened my eyes with bold detail. I loved this book!

This is a tastefully written story. I did not realize the genera when I down loaded the story and could not relate to the eroticism of the book. I could understand the emotions of both characters and felt I developed an understanding towards them.
Well done.

As with most free literature, it has some quirky spots, but over all it was a short but interesting read. Searching for "free lesbian" reading. Some are good, some are bad. This was on the good side. Nice, hot little story.

The point of erotica is obviously to stimulate the senses. I believe that could have been better accomplished by building up the character's initial encounter more and by describing the inner thoughts of the characters.

I love ur books....... This one gave me something to think about. I had to think about the position in this one and I must say, I've never tried it but I will soon. Thanks for keeping girls only books available.

This short story had no character development whatsoever, and it lacked any sort of depth or feeling. To say the least, quite a disappointment. Thank goodness it was a short read, and free on my kindle, or I would be even harsher with my critique.