Can I Taste It?

Too many typos. Main character is pompous. The writing is lacking something that I can't quite put my finger on- It's missing some depth. Doesn't flow very well, and sometimes doesn't make much sense at all. Like that whole situation with "juanesia".(and that name is distracting.)And why must each character yell and scream during (ahem) certain activities? Kinda unrealistic. On par with the writings of that Weber guy.

The orgasmic euphoria envelopes my body as the words from the page caress my thoughts. I'm tempted to touch myself but work prohibits such action. David Weaver, this book was nothing short of fantastic! Never have i read a erotica that had me so fulfilled. I give more stars and an even longer review but I have to hurry to read the sequel