(A Sweet Western Historical Romance) (Mail-Order Brides Club Book 1)

Story could have included more dialogue and detail. Train ride was skipped. Needed more scenes of characters interacting. Author needs to do more research of the era of which she is writing. She referred to teabags, something not available to consumers until around 1903 and shorts as underwear worn by her husband. Men wore union suits or drawers. As for her pasta dinner she prepared ... did she make her own pasta or did she buy it and would it have been available in that era out in Montana? Simmering the sauce with the spices? Again, just a brief sentence about preparing the dinner making it sound like it was easy as pouring out a jar of Prego and boiling up the noodles. Details, accuracy missing.
Author has promise ... but needs to be more thorough and careful in her writing.

Great love story and a good plot. Just enough sex to keep it interesting without being too descriptive. I loved the characters and can't wait for the next book. And what's really nice is that it has an epilogue.

Although this book was quite predictable, I enjoyed the
Character Emma who was brave and optimistic to travel across the country
To marry a stranger. It also showed a danger to women from men who think they
Are macho if they can take advantage of women. Too hundred years later and sadly
It is still the same.