Obsessions (Alpha City Book 1)

Needs editing. Spelling and word usage errors. Characters need more development. I liked the interaction between the Alphas (note that the plural does not use a ', that would be the possessive), as well as the general premise behind Alpha City.

OMG this was truly and wonderful book. Bryce Evans has done it again.
London and Zoey are friends but after leaving college graduation she meets Zoey brother who is a Alpha this where all the fire works start if you as me. But I don't want to give away from their story. I give Obsession five stars and you'll enjoy from start to finish.

London Grey and Zoey Malone are best friends who met in college. London is there to build up Zoey self confidence after witnessing her being bullied by group of girls and that cements their friendship. Zoey's brother Ryan is the alpha of her pack who has promised to take care of his s sister after their parents death. Ryan has London investigated but it turns into more than he bargains for. Lives are threatened when London moves to Alpha City to start a business with her bff. If you love shifters, magic, love, action and a touch of mystery you will love this well written book.

OMG this was truly and wonderful book. Bryce Evans has done it again.
London and Zoey are friends but after leaving college graduation she meets Zoey brother who is a Alpha this where all the fire works start if you as me. But I don't want to give away from their story. I give Obsession five stars and you'll enjoy from start to finish.

London Grey and Zoey Malone are best friends who met in college. London is there to build up Zoey self confidence after witnessing her being bullied by group of girls and that cements their friendship. Zoey's brother Ryan is the alpha of her pack who has promised to take care of his s sister after their parents death. Ryan has London investigated but it turns into more than he bargains for. Lives are threatened when London moves to Alpha City to start a business with her bff. If you love shifters, magic, love, action and a touch of mystery you will love this well written book.

I double checked, but didn't see anything that said this was YA or a Teen book. The phrasing read like it. Author: The use of incorrect punctuation and misused words will change the meaning of a sentence. The only reason I didn't give it 1 star is because I enjoyed the idea.

Bryce Evans offers her readers a captivating paranormal romance with action, adventure, and a unique storytelling voice that captured my imagination from the very first page!

The characters are thoroughly developed and emotionally engaging. Bryce Evans' well written storyline introduces readers to the first book of what I hope will become a long and multi-titled series. The diverse world of the shifters, magical elements, and human experiences are delicately balanced and expertly blended in a way that flows seamlessly!

As a fan of her previous series, I was expecting to enjoy this latest effort, but was unprepared for how completely absorbed I became while reading Obsessions. If you think that you've read everything the paranormal genre has to offer, think again, and buy this book!

My OFFICIAL REVIEW written for Carly's Book Reviews

Genre: Paranormal
Author: Bryce Evans
Book: Obsessions (Alpha City #1)
My Star Rating: 4 out of 5
Will I read I read it again? YES

I was given this book to read and give an honest review. This review is my honest opinion and I have fully read this book.
One word for this book…. WOW. This was a very fast read for me and when it was done I was not ready for it to be done. The main Alpha Ryder was hot, hot, and hot. Although I did want to throttle him a bit for not believing in London at one point. But all is forgiven.
I liked all the players in this story and I found this book to run smoothly and enjoyable. I do wish we could find out a little more about London. But I did feel like it was complete story. Can’t wait for the next book in the series!!

LOOOVVEEDDDD this book. A perfect blend of fantasy, filled with shifters and witches.
The characters are all very attaching, Zoey and London hit it instantly and we dive into the developing friendship with them and grow with them. And then Ryder appears. The attraction is instantaneous!! And we fill it. But it takes time to actually flourish and the trust to build after their rocky start.

I loved this story because the story took its time to develop, nothing was rush but it wasn't slow either. I fell in love with the characters and I cannot wait for the next books to come out!!

Thank you Bryce for this Amazeballs story.....I'm now a hard core fan! This is my first book from you after meeting you in a book party and all I can say is....OMG I WAS MISSING OUT ALL THIS TIME!!!!!!!!! This book is action packed but don't worry ladies we definitely still get the hotter then hot controlling alpha male that we all love. And of course the sexy scenes that every hot alpha needs. Bryce absolutely left you trying to rush to the next page because u just need to know what is going to happen. I love a story with a great ending and this book definitely has one but at the same time I NEED MORE lol I 100% need Zoey's story. I know it will be just as great! Awesome job Bryce♡

Bryce Evans never fails to impress me. She had me hooked from the beginning with characters that I fell in love with. Each book this author writes is better that the last. I would recommend this book to everyone I know. I can't wait until the next book!

Bryce Evans writes with such ease and creativeness. I will be honest I usually do not enjoy books in this genre, but Bryce builds her story and her characters so well, that I had a difficult time putting the book down. Once I started reading Obsession Alpha City I was so captured by two characters, London and Zoey. London and Zoey brought the book alive and brought the best out of Bryce's story.

I would recommend this book to any reader that is looking for a first book series that presents a great story line

I received this book for an honest review. It was difficult getting into the book for a couple reasons. The first was the dialog between characters and the internal monologue that took place. The author did a lot of telling or stating facts instead of showing the reader threw actions so they could come to there own/the authors conclusion. There were a lot of grammatical errors, misplaced words/commas/etc that took away from the story.

The plot encompasses love, destiny, friendship, and an upcoming war. The chapters switched between character perspective and sometimes this happened within the chapters. When that happened, it wasn't always clear on who was describing what was happening. The plot had some unrealistic elements, especially when it came to military grade spy equipment and the love between Ryder and London. Overall, I think the author had a good idea when creating the plot but wasn't able to execute it 100%.

Zoey Malone goes to college and meets London. Zoey is from Alpha City her older brother Ryder is in love with London. I love how this book flows. Honestly I will recommend this book who love supernatural books.

This was a very well written book. The characters were believable and interesting. There was drama, adventure, acceptance, suspense, love and sex. The lead female character was spicy and strong and the male lead was a alpha, but interesting. Very good book. Looking forward to more from this series.

I received this book for an honest review. It was difficult getting into the book for a couple reasons. The first was the dialog between characters and the internal monologue that took place. The author did a lot of telling or stating facts instead of showing the reader threw actions so they could come to there own/the authors conclusion. There were a lot of grammatical errors, misplaced words/commas/etc that took away from the story.

The plot encompasses love, destiny, friendship, and an upcoming war. The chapters switched between character perspective and sometimes this happened within the chapters. When that happened, it wasn't always clear on who was describing what was happening. The plot had some unrealistic elements, especially when it came to military grade spy equipment and the love between Ryder and London. Overall, I think the author had a good idea when creating the plot but wasn't able to execute it 100%.

Zoey Malone goes to college and meets London. Zoey is from Alpha City her older brother Ryder is in love with London. I love how this book flows. Honestly I will recommend this book who love supernatural books.